tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5328014776473730528.post4242355290183366625..comments2024-01-18T05:37:22.292-05:00Comments on lisa and laura write: Teaser Tuesday: Unclaimed Baggagelisa and laurahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18144863275895761642noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5328014776473730528.post-3020358013871345092009-09-02T11:00:03.255-04:002009-09-02T11:00:03.255-04:00Nicely done! You're such teases =)Nicely done! You're such teases =)Sherrie Petersenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11670339498152684137noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5328014776473730528.post-38077575054160973152009-09-01T22:27:36.118-04:002009-09-01T22:27:36.118-04:00Voice is awesome. Very strong and colorful. You ...Voice is awesome. Very strong and colorful. You really get a feel for their personalities.<br /><br />I have to admit I hated INTO THE WILD. What a little bitch.<br /><br />But... he does look good in GQ.Little Ms Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00034349274576201531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5328014776473730528.post-58984885874241360482009-09-01T21:45:53.382-04:002009-09-01T21:45:53.382-04:00Hilarious and sad at the same time: this is just w...Hilarious and sad at the same time: this is just wonderful. Beautiful job getting the background in without moving off the story. <br /><br />Hooked, hooked, hooked.sunnahttp://amybai.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5328014776473730528.post-39309874224198163672009-09-01T21:14:10.346-04:002009-09-01T21:14:10.346-04:00Too freaking funny.Too freaking funny.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09556206184198452490noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5328014776473730528.post-63386193180648341982009-09-01T19:30:54.243-04:002009-09-01T19:30:54.243-04:00"The ride of shame." I love the voice. ..."The ride of shame." I love the voice. It seems very genuine....which is a very good thing, I think.<br /><br />I love that you post pieces of your WIP. Me=chicken.<br /><br />Shelleystoryqueenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07039684494823420722noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5328014776473730528.post-76083601958881564472009-09-01T18:05:25.181-04:002009-09-01T18:05:25.181-04:00LOVE!!! I can't wait for your book to come out...LOVE!!! I can't wait for your book to come out-seriously, every little snippet is awesome!Frankie Diane Mallishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06066659801542129040noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5328014776473730528.post-4794772449376025742009-09-01T17:21:15.188-04:002009-09-01T17:21:15.188-04:00Very well done, girls!Very well done, girls!Elana Johnsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05877856005992028912noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5328014776473730528.post-83887395761088160502009-09-01T16:24:23.826-04:002009-09-01T16:24:23.826-04:00Fabulous. J'adore this! :)Fabulous. J'adore this! :)Weronika Janczukhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02578288655500573458noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5328014776473730528.post-57675389108046638462009-09-01T15:42:15.462-04:002009-09-01T15:42:15.462-04:00Good work, as usual.Good work, as usual.confused homemakerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05822199182685614574noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5328014776473730528.post-73252547724405362822009-09-01T15:06:10.162-04:002009-09-01T15:06:10.162-04:00Ooh, I love it, especially the voice of the charac...Ooh, I love it, especially the voice of the characters. *jumps up and down in excitement* I think I might know what happens next. Or at least how it ties into one of the other awesome snippets we've seen.<br /><br />Can't wait for more!Sarah Wyliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13576639307836794270noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5328014776473730528.post-62364695742432874732009-09-01T13:45:35.178-04:002009-09-01T13:45:35.178-04:00Daaaaang. Okay, I have no choice. I HAVE TO read...Daaaaang. Okay, I have no choice. I HAVE TO read this book! Please write it posthaste :P. <br /><br />P.S. It's not nice to tease us with things we can't have yet ;). Write faster!Rebecca Knighthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15214077952378770753noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5328014776473730528.post-12475316353262850272009-09-01T12:35:47.551-04:002009-09-01T12:35:47.551-04:00K.M. is absolutely right--you guys are the masters...K.M. is absolutely right--you guys are the masters at avoiding the dreaded infodump. Nice work.Loretta Nyhanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02680385300130233511noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5328014776473730528.post-35731768795380705662009-09-01T11:52:21.833-04:002009-09-01T11:52:21.833-04:00It's great, you guys! You say so much in so f...It's great, you guys! You say so much in so few words...that's awesome!!!Kimberly Dertinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00368511542359560174noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5328014776473730528.post-14054899761391109382009-09-01T11:04:41.156-04:002009-09-01T11:04:41.156-04:00love it and I need to take a lesson about weaving ...love it and I need to take a lesson about weaving in the info-like K.M. said- nicely done. Teh only typo I saw is maybe you were trying to say "helpING him get to alaska." Take Care!Christina Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01799776834213400246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5328014776473730528.post-20781606616633895302009-09-01T10:38:46.986-04:002009-09-01T10:38:46.986-04:00Funny. Is that from your WIP?Funny. Is that from your WIP?Tanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10518718614911804428noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5328014776473730528.post-21096976043747725872009-09-01T09:16:22.902-04:002009-09-01T09:16:22.902-04:00Oh boy... This is gettin' good.
goooood.Oh boy... This is gettin' good. <br /><br />goooood.Katie Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08067504634291164972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5328014776473730528.post-39099163292733196022009-09-01T09:14:36.713-04:002009-09-01T09:14:36.713-04:00I like how you weaved in crucial information witho...I like how you weaved in crucial information without it feeling like an info dump. <br /><br />Nicely done.K. M. Waltonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07167022736028223997noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5328014776473730528.post-75199434991818970472009-09-01T08:46:42.578-04:002009-09-01T08:46:42.578-04:00Love it!! Very creative and sassy. The 'voice&...Love it!! Very creative and sassy. The 'voice' and attitude of these characters shine through.<br /><br />JennaJAlexanderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13640848555229168770noreply@blogger.com